Review: Invisibility by Andrea Cremer and David Levithan

11 June, 2013 Reviews 5 comments

This book wasn’t terrible. It began with a lot of good things and won me over initially, but then it quickly fell apart, and here’s why:

Cursecaster, Spellseeker: A Mess of Information
I want to know the cool deetz, yeah. I want to be hip with them kids, yo. As a reader it’s crucial for me to learn all the newfangled traits of the cool fantasy world where the characters live. So tell me and I’ll listen, and I’ll probably be really interested. But when the information just keeps building without stopping, the reading process feels a lot less like discovery and a lot more like I’m being spoon-fed. I really liked where the idea of the spellseeking stuff was going, but I became complacent when it just drawled on.

Return of the Unbelievable Insta-Love
Elizabeth and Stephen fell in love in a matter of what, days? It was kind of ridiculous, and while it’s understandable on Stephen’s part (the kid hadn’t spoken to a single female other than his mother all his life), the devotion component of their relationship, although prevalent in the plot, was incredibly difficult to get behind. In fact, despite moments of cuteness and strength, their relationship didn’t bode well with me.

The ‘I-Keep-Putting-The-Book-Down’ Curse
This book was just really hard to finish, mostly because about half of the way in I stopped caring how it ended. I took long breaks in between reading it, and continuing felt more tedious than willful.

This book did, however, have it’s saving graces!

Stuff I liked: The Writing
Especially all things from Stephen’s perspective. The language and tone were all very well chosen and placed. I adored the description of Stephen’s world before and after meeting Elizabeth, and how the strong writing made such a bizarre circumstance feel almost plausible. Like someone’s actual life.

Laurie!
By far my favourite character in the whole book (though there weren’t very many to choose from) was Laurie, Elizabeth’s brother. Not only was his plot line my favourite part about Elizabeth, he was basically just the rock that carried the others, being equally parts leader and hilarious.

This book had some redeeming qualities, but I’d say that the bad outweighs the good.


5 Responses to “Review: Invisibility by Andrea Cremer and David Levithan”

  1. jnikkir

    Could not agree more with your review. I don’t think the spellseeker/cursecaster details were handled well either. But the first half of the book, and like you said, everything from Stephen’s perspective, was SO well-done. I wish the whole book had felt like that, I think it would’ve been amazing if it had.

  2. Danny_Bookworm

    Oh no… so sad! There are a lot of reviews who are not so enthused ;( Stil, the premise sounds so amazing!

  3. Shannelle C

    What a shame, since this is how David’s books usually end up as. A great premise, but doesn’t really deliver.

  4. alexalovesbooks

    I was really excited when I first heard of this book, but I’ve not been inclined to pick up a copy yet. There’s just something about this story that doesn’t really click with me in terms of the things I enjoy as a reader, so I still can’t decide if I want to pick it up or not. We’ll see how it goes, I suppose.

  5. cynicalsapphire

    This one worked better for you than it did for me, which perhaps gives you an idea how I felt about this book. Basically, Laurie was the only plus for me. Flat characters, instalove (those two do seem to go hand in hand don’t they?), and endless infodumps. Nope, nope, nope.