First off, I LOVE the meta-ness of putting that into your own story.
Also, I am dying of laughter at these excerpts. This story clearly is a masterpiece, and I would not be surprised if an agent picked it up based on this post. I mean, who wouldn’t?
My favorite part:
“‘Don’t call me Win!’ she exploded. ‘I never win! I never win!'”
That ending. Oh wow. Just wow.
cynicalsapphire
First off, I LOVE the meta-ness of putting that into your own story.
Also, I am dying of laughter at these excerpts. This story clearly is a masterpiece, and I would not be surprised if an agent picked it up based on this post. I mean, who wouldn’t?
My favorite part:
“‘Don’t call me Win!’ she exploded. ‘I never win! I never win!'”
That ending. Oh wow. Just wow.